C is for Couples

Flash Fiction Challenge

flash-fiction-badgePrompt 26: Do you notice anything different about me?”

 C is for Couples
By Eilidh Thain

”Do you notice anything different about me?” He asked.

“No,” she said.



“That’s weird ‘cause there’s something really different about me that most normal people would notice.”

“Still no.”

“You’re not even looking at me.”

“Don’t need to.”

“Just glance this way.”

“No, I’m busy.”

“No, you’re not. You’re staring at the wall. Just glance at me. It’ll be worth it.”

“I’m sure it won’t be.”

“It will, I promise.”

“You’ve said that before and it was terrible.”

“Terrible. Really? Don’t be so dramatic.”

“Okay, horrifying, then.

“Come on, babe. I need your support.”

“Christ, okay.”



26 thoughts on “C is for Couples

  1. Meg says:

    OMG. I laughed and laughed. Really wasn’t prepared from that. I have a friend who posts scary clown pictures on my FB page just to torment me. I am terrified of clowns. Also, your dialogue was great.

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